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A Discorded World
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An interactive story, where YOU are in control. Your task is simple, comment a command or action you want our character to do. Once per week I will update the story also displaying who said the command and anyone who said similar. Stats, inventory and skills will be put in this space in later chapters.
-TUTORIAL-
Stats: these are your health, and willpower.
Your willpower can be converted into magic from time to time, however the more you use magic, the more your chaos skill will rise.
Health will decrease as you take damage from events in this adventure. Although losing big health is rare, small cuts and bumps build up over time. Upon reaching zero, you will pass out.
skills:
Charm
Luck
Chaos
Magic
Speech
Strength
Charm is a skill that can prove useful to the opposite gender, being able to flirt your target into doing what you want can be a bonus. Charm can also be useful for finding a girl or boy that you like.
Luck is just what it is; it has a chance of letting you use magic with no chaos build. But only very slightly. The skill also raises your other skills slightly. also heightens your chances of finding rare items, winning in gambling and meeting a girl or boy you seem to like
Chaos is everything that's not good, chaos will most commonly build up by using magic but it can be raised by doing actions that are selfish and do not care of the well being of others. While chaos will heighten your strength and intimidation chances. it will lower others liking towards you and upon reaching 100 you will be bought back to your own world. A tutorial on returning to equestria will be provided once chaos reaches 100.
Magic is a skill that can only be used while you are within equestria, using willpower will increase your Chaos. The higher your magic skill is, the more powerful your magic spells will be, along with how many you can remember at one time.
Strength measures your raw physical power. The higher your strength the more intimidating you can be along with being able to lift heavier items and push heavier objects.
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You finally reach your door after yet another hard day at school. You're glad it is the summer break and you eagerly await hanging around with your friends, and causing unwanted trouble as you always have. Making your way upstairs as your fatigued legs cry for a rest you reach the bathroom. Examining yourself in the mirror you find you look as good as you always have and still fresh.
What do you look like? (Auto answered)
You're an average height male with short but loose white hair, dyed obviously. This chunk of fur on your head is flowing from your normal, round human face that holds your deep-sea blue eyes and small nose. From the neck down your human body supports two human arms with barely much muscle and from the waist down your human legs are long but hold a good heft of muscle.
You're currently equipped with school suit with many useful pockets, but not much else.
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Turning away from the mirror you walk into your room, the day has been long. You just want to sleep; glancing to your shelves you see your collection of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic plushies. The whole of the Mane six. You feel sleep would be easier if you had one of them with you as you slept.
What will you do?
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An interactive story, where YOU are in control. Your task is simple, comment a command or action you want our character to do. Once per week I will update the story also displaying who said the command and anyone who said similar. Stats, inventory and skills will be put in this space in later chapters.
-TUTORIAL-
Stats: these are your health, and willpower.
Your willpower can be converted into magic from time to time, however the more you use magic, the more your chaos skill will rise.
Health will decrease as you take damage from events in this adventure. Although losing big health is rare, small cuts and bumps build up over time. Upon reaching zero, you will pass out.
skills:
Charm
Luck
Chaos
Magic
Speech
Strength
Charm is a skill that can prove useful to the opposite gender, being able to flirt your target into doing what you want can be a bonus. Charm can also be useful for finding a girl or boy that you like.
Luck is just what it is; it has a chance of letting you use magic with no chaos build. But only very slightly. The skill also raises your other skills slightly. also heightens your chances of finding rare items, winning in gambling and meeting a girl or boy you seem to like
Chaos is everything that's not good, chaos will most commonly build up by using magic but it can be raised by doing actions that are selfish and do not care of the well being of others. While chaos will heighten your strength and intimidation chances. it will lower others liking towards you and upon reaching 100 you will be bought back to your own world. A tutorial on returning to equestria will be provided once chaos reaches 100.
Magic is a skill that can only be used while you are within equestria, using willpower will increase your Chaos. The higher your magic skill is, the more powerful your magic spells will be, along with how many you can remember at one time.
Strength measures your raw physical power. The higher your strength the more intimidating you can be along with being able to lift heavier items and push heavier objects.
-*-
You finally reach your door after yet another hard day at school. You're glad it is the summer break and you eagerly await hanging around with your friends, and causing unwanted trouble as you always have. Making your way upstairs as your fatigued legs cry for a rest you reach the bathroom. Examining yourself in the mirror you find you look as good as you always have and still fresh.
What do you look like? (Auto answered)
You're an average height male with short but loose white hair, dyed obviously. This chunk of fur on your head is flowing from your normal, round human face that holds your deep-sea blue eyes and small nose. From the neck down your human body supports two human arms with barely much muscle and from the waist down your human legs are long but hold a good heft of muscle.
You're currently equipped with school suit with many useful pockets, but not much else.
-*-
Turning away from the mirror you walk into your room, the day has been long. You just want to sleep; glancing to your shelves you see your collection of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic plushies. The whole of the Mane six. You feel sleep would be easier if you had one of them with you as you slept.
What will you do?
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this is a interactive story where you have to comment an action or command of whats to happen next. simple.
i will check every week for comments. so take your time thinking, you have 7 days to think.
i will check every week for comments. so take your time thinking, you have 7 days to think.
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Originality Technique ImpactThis is going to be fun. So far, you've written perfection. There were no mistakes which I noticed, and I really want to see what command you do next. This is very late, I know. Maybe link to the next chapter? That way not as many people will suggest things for this chapter, which you've linked from your profile page.
The direction this is going in is liked. The person could very much be anyone at this point, and being an interactive story, this is a good thing, because it allows all people to slip themselves into the story. Meow.